Hi Spanish :troll:
Well i'm glad that i see new blood in this area.
I can say that it seems that you've watched some tutorials before you start creating tags,since the most people that starting PS they make a tag like a bg,one render and a really awfull text (included myself too).
Now back to this tag i can say that you've used a really nice render in your tag and this render has something special.I'll tell it in my final lines :LOL:
Your effects back of your focal seem to be oversharped.You can either reduce the layer's opacity or you can go to fade sharpen and reduce from there.You choose.
I can't understand why you did put that black line in front of.It's really ugly and doesn't fit with the tag at all.
You have blured parts of your focal in a wrong way.Wanna listen to my taste?Now i'll go back to the "special thing".
With this render you can increase your tag's depath.You can blur either your whole tag in a way,or just your focal and leave unblured the gun.Belive it this will give a feeling to your tag.At least try it.
A final step,if i were you i would darken the edges a bit more and for my final layer i would set a maximum effect at 2px on multiply 25% opacity.
P.S. Your text's possition is totally wrong.In order to find the best place for it either apply the Rules Of third or check this tutorial.It might help you
In case you need anything else post here.
Hope that i helped,regards