If you can't see the light source in this tag, then probably, you got to go see a doctor.
Secondly, the text is a clear matter of taste.I didn't like it too, but it's all about taste, which differs from person to person.
With the light source, your goal is to lighten up the areas of the focal point.The building back there isn't something important.
Cheers!
PS: Goddess isn't a newbie.