Nice ones.
I like more the first one but your text color its not fit with the whole feeling.
I would do a layer and a clipping mask for having the same color like your backround and play with it until I find the proper.
I would turn the lighthings that you used to "Linear Dodge(Add)" for a better view.
Also, burn in this case it would be nice and look better but not over-useing of it.
Finally, resize your text a little bit make it more smaller.
In overall, its a very good tag.
KIU.