Flavio Posted February 10, 2010 Posted February 10, 2010 Those are/is my second trie(s)... :P I know the rates are be 1/10 or Negative/10 :P So better not to rate xD Simple Render,Simple Text, Crappy effects. Nothing else xD Quote
|Itachi Posted February 10, 2010 Posted February 10, 2010 Fix text and remove the creators signature (the yellow one) also the bg isnt so good.(only c4ds -.- ) try to resize and place the render to other place rating 5/10 keep trying. Quote
Flavio Posted February 10, 2010 Author Posted February 10, 2010 Fix text meaning? New font :P ? I liked the sign thats why i didnt delete it ^^. As i said i am not a newbie, I am something even dumber :D Quote
StoRm* Posted February 10, 2010 Posted February 10, 2010 7/10 nc try i think u can do it better Quote
MasterDisaster Posted February 10, 2010 Posted February 10, 2010 It's way good but you need to read some guides you know... Quote
Flavio Posted February 10, 2010 Author Posted February 10, 2010 Yeah i know, i was about to. This one try is from personal knowing. Simple Signature :P Now i am going to read and improve my skills :) Quote
MasterDisaster Posted February 11, 2010 Posted February 11, 2010 Yeah i know, i was about to. This one try is from personal knowing. Simple Signature :P Now i am going to read and improve my skills :) Another tip: I've seen guys without reading guys much time and all they got was a shit.So just don't think that reading guides makes you noob.It helps you... Quote
Flavio Posted February 11, 2010 Author Posted February 11, 2010 Another tip: I've seen guys without reading guys much time and all they got was a shit.So just don't think that reading guides makes you noob.It helps you... 0ka :) Even if reading guides improve my skills and people think who read is a dumb person... I dont care, i know it will improve my skills, i dont give a sh1t what people think :) Quote
Furiosus Posted February 11, 2010 Posted February 11, 2010 Remove that thing on the top left corner. Resize the text, change font and I think white colour would fit better with the whole signature. Don´t just add some C4Ds in the background. Try to use effects. You should read some tutorials. Quote
Flavio Posted February 11, 2010 Author Posted February 11, 2010 I dont want to remove the thing xD I like it alot. Yeah i will read guides. Quote
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