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Those are/is my second trie(s)... :P I know the rates are be 1/10 or Negative/10 :P

So better not to rate xD Simple Render,Simple Text, Crappy effects. Nothing else xD

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Fix text and remove the creators signature (the yellow one) also the bg isnt so good.(only c4ds -.- ) try to resize and place the render to other place

 

 

rating 5/10

 

keep trying.

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Yeah i know, i was about to. This one try is from personal knowing. Simple Signature :P Now i am going to read and improve my skills :)

Another tip:

I've seen guys without reading guys much time and all they got was a shit.So just don't think that reading guides makes you noob.It helps you...

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Another tip:

I've seen guys without reading guys much time and all they got was a shit.So just don't think that reading guides makes you noob.It helps you...

 

0ka :) Even if reading guides improve my skills and people think who read is a dumb person... I dont care, i know it will improve my skills, i dont give a sh1t what people think :)

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Remove that thing on the top left corner.

 

Resize the text, change font and I think white colour would fit better with the whole signature.

 

Don´t just add some C4Ds in the background. Try to use effects.

 

You should read some tutorials.

 

 

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