The text is absolutely horrible :P
What was the original picture you used?
I wouldn't use 'Bevel & Emboss', if I were you. Because using it for the sake of using it doesn't give such great results as you see.
Text isn't as readable because of it. Did you use 'Outer Glow' too? I wouldn't necessarily use it on text myself. But yeah, imo, get rid of that 'Bevel & Emboss' and get some soft 'Color Gradient' instead and maybe a 'Stroke' (1px, dark & lowered opacity) instead of the 'Outer Glow'.
But the background, if you did it yourself for that matter, looks really leet!