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My time (oh god)

 

Goddess: Nice flow a text would make it better. Bad small dots - Hurry job ;S

 

Godpower : great use of vector the text need improvement no flow.

 

Final choice: GodPower reason: It has the wow factor and it looks nice in my eyes

Sorry goddess :(

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Goddess: Nice flow a text would make it better. Bad small dots - Hurry job ;S

 

remove this please

 

and try to judge more wisely xD

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@GodPower:

Impressive work on c4d's and vectors or w/e you used.It just gives me the look of a professional tag but the truth is it has some disadvantages too.Plus,the fact that you added text hasn't affected the tag in a bad way,meaning it was good :P!Imo,if you had used a pre-made background and give it some blur it would be way better than that blue thingie.An underwater look could be given easily and make it even better.To sum up,I can't really see anything bad.It just doesn't surpass your skills,thing it makes it expected.You should be more creative nabbie.However,the outcome still seem to be stunning.Good job.

 

 

@Goddess

The first look of it gave me the impression that godpower had no chance but now that I see it better it has too many faults.Let's get it on.

If you observe it in a fast way you will think that the flow is one of the best ever applied but since my closer look on it didn't have such a result I gotta say that your biggest advantage will not count as a "+" today.

The matter of depth shouldn't even be mentioned as it really good applied.Now about composition,I can't see a "clear" theme.It's just TOO MUCH for my taste.Also there are some c4d's placed on render on lighten or linear dodge that don't blend at all.It's like another image.The absence of text and borders make it even worse on my eyes since a good typesetting placed at the right side of the tag would have given it a much better look.To sum up,it's a great tag,but not what could beat gp's ass.

 

Final vote goes to: GODPOWER!

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Goddess

First of all, allow me to post the Tag with a few modifications (Squares & Numbers) which will help me to point out a few things.

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CONS

 

-1: These white dots do not fit at every single part of the signature, such as the one I have highlighted.

-2: Such C4Ds could have been placed in a better manner/place, but for sure they shouldn't be too visible..They kinda ruin the flow!

-3: Here goes the same (2).

-4: I suppose that you can see by yourself that the right side is kinda messy.. You could easily fix that, but I suppose that you didn't want to..

 

Additionals.

Even if some parts of the lighting have been handled well, you miss a good lightsource that will provide the tag with a better-looking lighting!

You could try adapting the render more to its background.. It's not bad now, but it could be better. Why not to seek perfection?

I won't consider it as a con, although I suppose that by adding a text would give you extra points, if you managed to fit it to the general outcome.

 

PROS

- Nice flow and depth. You have managed to apply them quite well!

- Good use of C4ds in order to provide some abstraction (to some parts only)!

- Well placed render

- Nicely selected focal

 

Summing up, I'd like to say that it was not a really bad try, but it is obvious that you didn't dedicate more than 10'. This means, that the current outcome is not surprising, although if you had worked more on it, you would obviously make less mistakes.

 

GodPower

First of all, allow me to post the Tag with a few modifications (Squares & Numbers) which will help me to point out a few things.

2hggrpd.png

 

 

CONS

 

-1: The text. Well, it was not a bad try, although you could have worked more on it. It's not bad, as I told, but it could be way better!

-2: You -beep-ed up with the warmth of the colours. Avoid doing it! In this very specific spot, you have added more than 5 colours, mixed, no matter what their warmth is about!

-3: Borders.. Adding black borders to such a lively & light signature - not a really good idea..

 

Additionals.

The depth is not okay.. You could try harder adapting it to the whole background!

No lightsource and no general lighting. Really bad!

 

PROS

- I personally like the "V" styled flow.

- Nice, HQ render!

- Well used brushes!

 

Summing up, I'd like to say that your try was surprisingly good, in comparison with your previous ones.

It's not perfect, but you can make it way better if you play with some settings.

 

 

Please note that everything I posted above, is according to my own point of view.

 

Overall Ratings:

Goddess: 6,7

GodPower: 7,9

 

Which means that my vote goes to GodPower.

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