Goddess Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 (edited) Hello, so I'm officially back into webdesign and into designing in general. This is what I'm working on currently, I'd love to hear some feedback, whether to continue or not. Old Version: http://i.imgur.com/ZBsJb8G.jpg?1 Also Added Teal version, cannot decide which one i prefer. Edited June 20, 2016 by SectoneART Quote
Snoopi Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 very beautifull and clean at the moment, just space on top 2 big Quote
Goddess Posted April 11, 2015 Author Posted April 11, 2015 your letters are so poor Menu/TypoLogo? I consist on simplicity, I do not like swirly fonts or stuffs. Haven't spent much time on the typography to be honest, more into the effects and design in general, once design is ready, i'll start working on typography. Quote
Snoopi Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 (edited) Menu/TypoLogo? I consist on simplicity, I do not like swirly fonts or stuffs. Haven't spent much time on the typography to be honest, more into the effects and design in general, once design is ready, i'll start working on typography. I think a very light stoke(black) or a litile bit bigger font would be better for logo, generally you need to make the users focus on important things fast and clear. your logo is ok Edited April 11, 2015 by Snoopi Quote
SweeTs Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 Yeah, looks nice. Go on and as Snoopi said, the spce on top is too big :) Quote
Ayami- Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 well Lineage2 should be as the classic about critical its nice to be simple but not too much simple Quote
Goddess Posted April 11, 2015 Author Posted April 11, 2015 Okay, topic updated, what do you think now? Quote
Snoopi Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 I would pick the first one and continue the website with the same style, also i like to add a very litile visible stoke behind the text on the menu try it maybe you like it too. stoke 1 px black around 10-20% Quote
Goddess Posted April 11, 2015 Author Posted April 11, 2015 I would pick the first one and continue the website with the same style, also i like to add a very litile visible stoke behind the text on the menu try it maybe you like it too. stoke 1 px black around 10-20% I'll give it a try, but currently I'm trying to think of a way to create the Content box + sidebars, damn so complicated... :( Quote
xDamian Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 (edited) It's great but the logo doesn't look good. I know you already answered some guy saying you like it simplistic, but it doesn't fit at all with the futuristic look the template has. Edit: Oh, you edited it. It looks a little bit better now but it needs something more. Especially the "Lineage 2" text. Edited April 11, 2015 by xDamian Quote
Goddess Posted April 11, 2015 Author Posted April 11, 2015 It's great but the logo doesn't look good. I know you already answered some guy saying you like it simplistic, but it doesn't fit at all with the futuristic look the template has. Edit: Oh, you edited it. It looks a little bit better now but it needs something more. Especially the "Lineage 2" text. I'm vectoring a logo, will be updated later, hopefully it'll look better, until then that's what I got to offer, hehe! :) Quote
kyosume Posted April 11, 2015 Posted April 11, 2015 Looks good. Maybe try and make the menu bar a bit more clear/readable and add some sexy fonts. Quote
Goddess Posted April 11, 2015 Author Posted April 11, 2015 Looks good. Maybe try and make the menu bar a bit more clear/readable and add some sexy fonts.More readable? I see them pretty clear, sexy fonts? Nah I dont use anything swirly curly or florishing, i like simple fonts especially for the menu. Seems like the menu bar isnt that good so i guess ill just change it but keep the background header. Quote
Strain Posted April 12, 2015 Posted April 12, 2015 The blue one is pretty awesome, but I think you need to work more on the logo :)Good job anyway, can't wait to see the final outcome. Quote
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