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Hello, i saw many tutorials about web design and i tried to create my own.

So here is my result.

 

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Well, first of all between the content boxes there is a huge uncovered space that should be covered. Also titles are too big.
Subscribe button it's not centered correclty and social icons are too big. Also sliders bullets are huge and it's not necessary to exist.

You need to work more on menu and especially in hovers and dividers. These dividers are ugly , big and wrong paced. I would also

suggest you to make an other page for login/account panel. About community staff, as you can see names are bigger than the title,

personally i don't suggest that. About bg i ilike the idea but placing different bg's everywhere doesn't look nice. You could use something
else. Search about textures , or wallpapers like a shade , etc. Server status looks ok, but the green bullet is too big and too colored.
That's all, if you want to ask anything or reqeust any help let me know. :)
See more guides and tuts.

Regards,

`iAndre.

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A lot of mistakes overthere dude.

Your resizes are totally wrong your header not creative at all.

The "Fovies since 2013" also wrong font and pt try to use another font and I think you just zoomed some spots why?

Also, this pattern from behind it doesn't help at all.

I recommend you to start again with something different.

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