[R&C]My first Template

[Vkouk]

 

Also big thanks to my bro Hades for his help.

[Vision]

quite nice. I don't really like the font text selection but in overall is fine.

[Vkouk]

what imperessed me,was the text lol :P

[Vision]

what imperessed me,was the text lol :P

 

Why is so Bold and big and white. Its kind of unfitted with the whole image.

[Vkouk]

maybe i  will do a animated text.cool ;d

[xax0r]

Nice background, and wrapper... but renders which you using here are crappy, that same with text...

[Necro]

I will agree with your idea better do them animated :D

[xDrac]

Sorry but this is horrible.

And why is the image so small? Can't really see anything. Can't zoom in either.

 

Only thing I really like is the background image. May I ask what that is?

Other than that it looks very bland and boring. There is no content what so ever. Just a blank page.

The menu looks a bit too crowded for me. But at least you thought of the spacing...

And don't just randomly place renders on your site to make things look more Lineage-ish. That's not how you accomplish that and it looks kinda cheap. :/

I wouldn't just color your web elements blandly and boring like that either. Spice it up a little. With texture or patterns for example? Or gradients at least? Layer effects, anything?

[Vkouk]

dude i am not designer,plus it was my first design.

[xDrac]

I never said you were. And I just pointed out your mistakes.

[Vkouk]

I never said you were. And I just pointed out your mistakes.

yes ok.thanks :)

i will try to remake it a bit

[takkenakos]

It is really nice. The background is cool and the whole site is great but it is better to change the font you are using for <<Lineage 2 Demo>>.

[Vegas]

Dont like it ventic,better code more that suits you better!

[Matt23]

You should post bigger images next time. If you're afraid of someone stealing your idea use the watermark. The template is too empty and typography sucks. As for the rest, I totally agree with xDrac.