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I see some tutorials about Illustrator and try work with venders and lights :3

But i think must see something with my Text because im not so good with it.

Maybe now make something different now...

 

~I hope say better words now:$

 

-Zelan

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Ιmage Broken I don't see anything. Fix it.

Works fine for me. Well to be honest, the bg is nice, the render doesn't fit though, and the text ain't visible at all plus the font that u used sucks :D kiu

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It's too packed, my eyes can't settle. Everything's very bright you should make things fade out and set a focus on the render.

The text is barely visible too, wrongly placed in my opinion.

Try blending the render a little more with green.

But it's cool, visible progress, that's a good thing^^

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Well what I can say for sure is that the text sucked hard and are invisible xd i berally noticed them, the overall is nice I like it but if you see it for a while you will notice that its too messy - so many random effects are put into the signature.. try making them fit better.

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Ιmage Broken I don't see anything. Fix it.

What you can't see ??? OK, the text isn't perfect but sure isn't invisible. ;3

It's too packed, my eyes can't settle. Everything's very bright you should make things fade out and set a focus on the render.

The text is barely visible too, wrongly placed in my opinion.

Try blending the render a little more with green.

But it's cool, visible progress, that's a good thing^^

I hope my skills level up with the next steps :)

Τhanks your opinion make me understand my faults!

Well what I can say for sure is that the text sucked hard and are invisible xd i berally noticed them, the overall is nice I like it but if you see it for a while you will notice that its too messy - so many random effects are put into the signature.. try making them fit better.

Well i am working some new signatures now but i dont post them for now.

Just make something good and be better i will post it.

PS: I post my sucks xD for take opinions and advices. Not for spamming and for fun :)

 

-Zelan

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Now I can dunno why it happends before. Listen, here ok you have nice effects up on it, but the render its not fit with all those effects. Maybe if you add some gradients with color : Green it will be better.

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Now I can dunno why it happends before. Listen, here ok you have nice effects up on it, but the render its not fit with all those effects. Maybe if you add some gradients with color : Green it will be better.

I will remember that and thanks for advices :)

 

-Zelan

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No matey.I'll let you know the why.

The whole tag is totally unblended.Never but never make colorful tag expect they are comic or vector tags.The color of the render does not fit with the rest.

It seems a bit copy pasted plus the effects are placed randomnly.

No actual flow and for sure no deapth.

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