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WHY PINK WHY?

WHY PINK WHY?

why not ? :P

Apart from the text everything else is good imo.

Maybe even delete the sparkles from the focal point.

 

Good Job :)

Red would fit much better instead pink.

Obviously you used a guide and that's good.

Really nice outcome, keep working hard. The text

and the best but is decent keep going buddy

i like that colors Blood Good Try :)

Apart from the text everything else is good imo.

Maybe even delete the sparkles from the focal point.

 

Good Job :)

ok i will try :) thnk you

Red would fit much better instead pink.

Obviously you used a guide and that's good.

Really nice outcome, keep working hard. The text

and the best but is decent keep going buddy

no i'v never seen any tutorial :)

i like to do allby myself all i see is ready sig and i take inspiration from them :)

i like that colors Blood Good Try :)

thnak you :)

Then your work is good, (w/o tut) BUT read some tuts, will help you improve more the sigs.

Well, it's a tag with potential.

What do I mean?It has a good basic structure and could be much better.

However, it lacks of many things. First and foremost, the focal point is abused with so many effects/fractals/c4d's .

Just clear them with the eraser!

Secondly, the light effects are bad..Some gradients, photofilter and levels would do the job.

You know, you shouldn't just paste the c4d/stock/whatever in and put it to "lighten" !

Play with the opacity, move it a bit, erase some parts that look bad..Even smudge it.

Try reading some tuts based on depth, flow and lighting ! ;)

Well, it's a tag with potential.

What do I mean?It has a good basic structure and could be much better.

However, it lacks of many things. First and foremost, the focal point is abused with so many effects/fractals/c4d's .

Just clear them with the eraser!

Secondly, the light effects are bad..Some gradients, photofilter and levels would do the job.

You know, you shouldn't just paste the c4d/stock/whatever in and put it to "lighten" !

Play with the opacity, move it a bit, erase some parts that look bad..Even smudge it.

Try reading some tuts based on depth, flow and lighting ! ;)

dude i play with a lot of things except opacity if you want i can give you my .PSD to check

No focal point, no signature.

dude i play with a lot of things except opacity if you want i can give you my .PSD to check

it's okay..better keep ur focal clean.

Its very very good i like it good job

Nice work..but try to fix a little bit the text..:D

Well guys since comments i added a 2nd Version tell me opinions