Text its palced strange, well overall its a good one... takign in consideration FinalGods post with the original Image, there are few changes... but still not enough. Anyways keep working, Regards!
Well i think its not the best work of your collection but its ok to. Gj
P.S: You should really stop using Stroke to all your Tags in some looks ok, but in this one totaly fucked up. Or you can change the Stroke to other color but still not good on thsi combo.
Second one its better, because on the first one the lights are a little to much visible and you must mask and create a ambiance in your tag. Overall good job.