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Well yeah lighting isn't the best here for my eye.What I mean is that you've made something a light coming from the sky but the way it spreads on the signature isn't well done, if my opinion counts.The left side of the signature isn't lighted properly and there's a huge color difference between left side and focal.You could decrease the opacity there and lighten up just the focal.That way you are going to show us the background is far away behind the signature (depth) and the light is "hitting" the focal on the signature.

 

Hope I helped you bro, don't leave it.I'm really impressed with your work.

-Blane

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Well yeah lighting isn't the best here for my eye.What I mean is that you've made something a light coming from the sky but the way it spreads on the signature isn't well done, if my opinion counts.The left side of the signature isn't lighted properly and there's a huge color difference between left side and focal.You could decrease the opacity there and lighten up just the focal.That way you are going to show us the background is far away behind the signature (depth) and the light is "hitting" the focal on the signature.

 

Hope I helped you bro, don't leave it.I'm really impressed with your work.

-Blane

 

yes you did, and no, i'm not gonna emoquit xD

I did it on purpose, but with a closer look I suppose that you're right.

Anyway, what's for sure is that I learned some stuff about c4ds and placement ^^

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Well, yes, I do.

About the edges, they may be dark, but they aren't empty. They are useful to emphasize the lightened focal too!

Choose your renders,wisely.

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I'll try to be more careful next time + place them in a better way ;p

And don't center them,place em a bit on left of right,and make colorful sigs.

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