[R & C] My Try.

[Vision]

Furthermore, there is one little problem with the quality and with the whole composition.

Try to focus on something specific. Like drac said you need some ideas. I will give you one, if this is related to lineage you can cut for example

a vesper bow I mean what bow includes and make a tab with it or something more or add effects on it and make something more interesting than from default one.

[Traixz]

looks great! ;D ;D