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[Zoke]

 

R&C Please.

[xax0r]

Nice try. But I don't like your render and (imho) you'd make some darken places. KIU!

[mweinz]

Good one m8, just feel a bit empty on the right, and you should create some focal point, cuz from the first time my eyes dont know what to see, so you need create a point where the atention must be on. the rest its pretty good you must try doing some smudge in differents layers and play with settings and optacy to create a best atmo. for last looks blurry, give more focus imo. KIU!

[Zeon®]

Nice smudging render rocks like it on the right I can see text or Am I wrong is if is text its little small.