[Commenct & Rate] First Try " Tomb Raider "

[xMaylox]

 

Its ok for 1st time? :)

 

 

 

 

[NotAbastard]

If this is really your first it's amazing mate.

 

The colours are fine and the effects are also acceptable .

 

Just take care on :

-The text - remove that stroke and change the colour and the opacity / you can even apply some C.mask on it to blend it with the rest.

-The render is fine now, but you could also smudge it a bit , duplicate it and smudge the secondary ones etc. to make it flow better with the BG

-The borders need to be a bit thinner, also change their opacity - low opacity borders tend to look way cooler, especially the thin ones.

[xMaylox]

If this is really your first it's amazing mate.

 

The colours are fine and the effects are also acceptable .

 

Just take care on :

-The text - remove that stroke and change the colour and the opacity / you can even apply some C.mask on it to blend it with the rest.

-The render is fine now, but you could also smudge it a bit , duplicate it and smudge the secondary ones etc. to make it flow better with the BG

-The borders need to be a bit thinner, also change their opacity - low opacity borders tend to look way cooler, especially the thin ones.

Can u help me with the text, if u have msn please send me on pm .. cuz i saw it u are expirienced and I wanna talk with u.

[ZeRo*]

For first try is pretty awesome. You made a good work on background but i can be better ;) the placing of the render is ok and the lighting is good ! Make thinner borders (1px) and it would be more beautiful ;) About the text...The placing is ok but it need some improvements. Read more tutorials and you will make must better signatures.

[xMaylox]

Updated.

[MiraDBZ]

It's very good for a first try. The text needs more work, but overall it looks good.

[ZeRo*]

The borders need more work :P when you finish your signature go to edit>stroke, choose the color and set the pixels to 1 .

[xMaylox]

The borders need more work :P when you finish your signature go to edit>stroke, choose the color and set the pixels to 1 .

I will try something

[xMaylox]

Any suggestions?

[ZeRo*]

Any suggestions?

If you fix the borders and the text you gonna see a BIG difference!

[xMaylox]

If you fix the borders and the text you gonna see a BIG difference!

Thats is realy hard, if u can help me :)

[xMaylox]

Updated.

What about that text?

 

All comments are accepted.

[nextlive]

Yes it's very good!

 

Tomb raider games are one of my favourite. I have two open tomb raiders now legend and anniversary :P i completed all tomb raider games 2-3 times. I play it since playstation 1 lol.

[xMaylox]

Yes it's very good!

 

Tomb raider games are one of my favourite. I have two open tomb raiders now legend and anniversary :P i completed all tomb raider games 2-3 times. I play it since playstation 1 lol.

Like me.

[FakMeImFamous]

its not tomb rider its resident evil 5 ;D