[Rate] Soldier Sig!

[Fя0zenInside™]

well this is my second time reading some guides and create a sig...just rate it

 

 

 

Updated I change the c4d with 2 others i change the fonts and added some effects more...

 

 

P.S:all comments are welcome

[Vazelos]

Nice one i like it. 8/10

[dimco]

pretty good, i dont like the "///" above ur name

it would be better if begind the soldier was the Greek Flag with blood and down left write "Για την Ελλάδα ρε γαμώτο"

7.5/10

[Coyote™]

The text is ON the render, it is good sometimes but here it doesn't look soo good.

The text's colour is a bit weird; green with gold and red? :s

I think that it would be better if you decreased the stroke's size from 3 to 1.

 

There is some lighting, nice one, but you could place it better!

What are these white "/ / / /" above the text?

 

Take care playing with the c4ds and create a kind of flow.

 

But it is obviously a very nice try for being a second creation!

Keep reading guides, and you will make some stunning creations!

 

P.S.; Use some gradients too ;p

[Yakamoto]

8/10 I Dont Like The Text :/

[Fя0zenInside™]

thanks for your comments guys i will keep reading some guides and i make some more but later;p

[Furiosus]

I don't like the text and you shouldn't add the abstract!

 

Nice Try, mate! Keep practising!

 

4.5/10

[™StarЯdoм®]

hmmm , the render is good  but i dont the like the colours, the c4d and the green text doesnt fit with render

 

6/10

[mVecAtoR]

great 10/10 ! I like it very much