[CnC]Graves Signature

[^Wyatt]

So... here's a newbie trying to learn something about this area ;D

I would appreciate any kind of comment, I wanna learn :)

 

P.S: Using PS CS2  :rage:

 

 

 

 

[FinalGod]

Hi Spanish :troll:

 

Well i'm glad that i see new blood in this area.

I can say that it seems that you've watched some tutorials before you start creating tags,since the most people that starting PS they make a tag like a bg,one render and a really awfull text (included myself too).

Now back to this tag i can say that you've used a really nice render in your tag and this render has something special.I'll tell it in my final lines  :LOL:

Your effects back of your focal seem to be oversharped.You can either reduce the layer's opacity or you can go to fade sharpen and reduce from there.You choose.

I can't understand why you did put that black line in front of.It's really ugly and doesn't fit with the tag at all.

You have blured parts of your focal in a wrong way.Wanna listen to my taste?Now i'll go back to the "special thing".

With this render you can increase your tag's depath.You can blur either your whole tag in a way,or just your focal and leave unblured the gun.Belive it this will give a feeling to your tag.At least try it.

A  final step,if i were you i would darken the edges a bit more and for my final layer i would set a maximum effect at 2px on multiply 25% opacity.

P.S. Your text's possition is totally wrong.In order to find the best place for it either apply the Rules Of third or check this tutorial.It might help you

In case you need anything else post here.

Hope that i helped,regards

[^Wyatt]

:troll:

About the tutorials, no I didn't read/see anyone.

Updated the post with a new one.

I tried to remove the dark line and to create a shot effect, with blur, in the cannon.

I don't really know where I should move the text... :P

 

A  final step,if i were you i would darken the edges a bit more and for my final layer i would set a maximum effect at 2px on multiply 25% opacity.

Did u mean like a border or what? Didn't understand it D:

 

 

And here tried to move the text to a right place!

[Stereotype]

First of all take a better PS.

Then let's go criticize u xD

Before criticize u i have to tell that for a beginner that's really good.

And now critics xD

Render position its pretty bad you can enlarge it, blur also its to much you should make the picture more darken and also to much blur on the gun side.

I understand you wanna make it looks like he shoot but... to much :P

My opinion text should be somewhere on the gun with an enlarged render...

Anyway more infos i can provide u on skype...

Overall a pretty good tag for your level.

With love ST aka IW :P !

[UnSponsored]

well,i have no time to read the commetns,i will read them later..

i know that you used this c4d cause i use it many times too

try putting it on linear dodje

[FinalGod]

i just mean to soft brush the edges with a black color brush :dat:

[Stereotype]

Fck c4ds  :forever alone like a boss:

[^Wyatt]

First of all take a better PS.

Then let's go criticize u xD

Before criticize u i have to tell that for a beginner that's really good.

And now critics xD

Render position its pretty bad you can enlarge it, blur also its to much you should make the picture more darken and also to much blur on the gun side.

I understand you wanna make it looks like he shoot but... to much :P

My opinion text should be somewhere on the gun with an enlarged render...

Anyway more infos i can provide u on skype...

Overall a pretty good tag for your level.

With love ST aka IW :P !

It can be bad but I like the render position in this case, next time maybe :P

I enlarged a little the text and reduced the blur of the "shoot" :D

And I made it a little bit more darker q.q

 

[Tijseh]

All wrote tons off text haha.

I say work your focus since i don't see any.

 

Else way I like it ;D

[^Wyatt]

All wrote tons off text haha.

I say work your focus since i don't see any.

 

Else way I like it ;D

Ty :p

I think I leave it finished  :rage:

[Stewie]

Ty :p

I think I leave it finished  :rage:

 

Its perfect as it is, everyone else are wrong... continue doing your style and don't listen to others... learn yourself otherwise youll not be unique yourself but just a copy of someone.

[Tijseh]

Its perfect as it is, everyone else are wrong... continue doing your style and don't listen to others... learn yourself otherwise youll not be unique yourself but just a copy of someone.

 

There is some called basics.... We don't tell him what style to use we tell him what he can work on in his next work.

[Stewie]

There is some called basics.... We don't tell him what style to use we tell him what he can work on in his next work.

 

What you are making is framework for his art.

And in art there are no frameworks.

[Zardanico]

What you are making is framework for his art.

And in art there are no frameworks.

 

You serious ? Loled hard at that.

 

[ONTopic]

 

I didn't like the blur idea at all, it looks like it doesn't fit there because blur is mainly to take our attention of what's going in the background and you used it in the smoke so it just doesn't "belong" so to say.