[R&C] Outcome #1

[KMKZ69]

 

My text its fail but i cant better! x)

[Vision]

Really bad work dude.. Nothing is right in this..

I will speak by truth and not my hard..

 

1) Your color text its totally unfitted with the whole.. When you duplicate the backround with the text try to find a point which is fitted with the whole image.

2) Render has a bad placement.

3) I can't understand your whole backround its kind of mess.. Try to control your effects by making more carefull steps in process of designing.

4) Use wallpapers its the best solution for the beggining.