do you like something like this?

I dont know about design but you should change the fonts the white ones.

I dont know about design but you should change the fonts the white ones.

i guess you are right!

Well the Style of the Text Style isn't the better and sure you must learn work with the colors;3

Read some tutorials in Deviantart.

Anyway, nice try :)

 

-Zelan

You should change the style on the fonts you use, also the font itself aswell ;d

 

changed :P

 

changed :P

Try using simple gradients, default fonts and maybe a low opacity stroke to have it stand out... for the beginning

Not something special too simple. Try to use something different. Express your style.