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[Vision]

 

That I made from FinalGod Tutorial how it looks?

[BonJovi®]

It's looks good, yeah dude, you did a pretty nice job, well just work a bit on text's color, cause it doesn't fit at all. The outcome is cool, good work! :)

[xDrac]

:/ I have to disagree.

I don't really like it.

The background looks a little weird, let things be darker the further away from the render it is.

Don't know, can't shake it. Just doesn't look like much to me. I'd use those particles differently too, imo they way you used them here it doesn't quite fit. Render looks like it was tossed on top and stands out a lot to me.

But it's good that you are trying different things^^ After all that's they way to go!

[Voqus]

Well, i totally agree with xDrac.

Btw can u pm me the render to try something?

[Epimetheus]

I think the render outstands the background way too much! Text is bad , but i like the effect on render ( that yellow things :P ) Overall it isn't that bad ,it's good to try new things ^^

[Vision]

Drac fine, I just try something new. Maybe my backround it's not the right for this. Anyways, thanks for your CnC. I'll edit later with one more comfort fractal.

[Alexkiss]

I just dont like those colors , they doesnt fit at all.

 

You was making better job as i remember ...

 

4,5/10

[FinalGod]

Which of my tuts used to make this one.

Ayway render stands out a bit and for sure you need to blend it more with the tag.

My advice.Try to use the adjustments layers on the top of your layers just to have below the whole renders of the tag.

 

@Voqus that render is in the pack i posted in Resources Boards.The latest one.Check it.

[Vision]

I edited a bit I think now is better

 

[xDrac]

Definitely, now we're talking. But I'd lower the brightness on the top right corner of the signature a little bit.

[Epimetheus]

I edited a bit I think now is better

 

i think text placement doesnt fit there at least to my eye , but i can't find where it would fit :\

[Vision]

Definitely, now we're talking. But I'd lower the brightness on the top right corner of the signature a little bit.

 

Yeah, but you mean the lightsource. It's not that brightness.

 

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i think text placement doesnt fit there at least to my eye , but i can't

find where it would fit :\

 

Well, maybe on your eye, sthing else mate if you don't know where it fits just don't post. Say something useful.

 

[FinalGod]

Every time try different positions.My advice always putting your text inside the focal.That's what I do.

[xDrac]

Yeah, but you mean the lightsource. It's not that brightness.

The sig there is still BRIGHT -er (ie. brightness) there. :P

No, but honestly, that looks a LOT better than the original you posted.

[Vision]

The sig there is still BRIGHT -er (ie. brightness) there. :P

No, but honestly, that looks a LOT better than the original you posted.

 

Now?