[CnC] Another signature

[RandomDude]

Just another sig.

 

v.2

[Grim.]

Remove the white stroke,also text sucks.

[RandomDude]

Remove the white stroke,also text sucks.

Could you explain? Whats wrong with it?

[BonJovi®]

Indeed as Grim said bordes should be removed. About the text, again Grim is correct, it's bad. It doesn't fit with the rest colours of the signature on a first point, plus it's bad placed. Try something else or remove it at all. The rest outcome is decent, keep up.

[RandomDude]

Version 2 added. Is that better? :)

[Grim.]

Duuude,TEXT!

[RandomDude]

Still dont like the text? o.O

[BonJovi®]

Text still bad buddy. Better remove it

[PrivaTe]

I dont know from photoshop but it looks a bit unrealistic, got me? Dont know but it looks like there is one background and infront this woman and that's all.

[Grim.]

Oh and blend the focal.

[Vision]

Yes, the text must be not in signature.. Anyway, nice try you have improved a lot..

[Hellish]

I dont know from photoshop but it looks a bit unrealistic, got me? Dont know but it looks like there is one background and infront this woman and that's all.

Exacly.

 

Look, your signature with a few brushes, gradient, blur and smudge: