[C&R] Edward elric.

[Amphetamine]

ok i just wanted to test my new resources.

here is my fast try ( about 20 mins)

All opinions accepted

 

ok it sucks hard , anyway negative rating accepted too :d

[Epimetheus]

2/10 only and only cause of the ugly text >.<

[Amphetamine]

2/10 only and only cause of the ugly text >.<

i think that text is ok , but i fucked up with fractals etc( need to test all of them XD) anyway thx

[BonJovi®]

2/10 only and only cause of the ugly text >.<

Pro text maker spoken :D.

Well It's a good try, bad text indeed but I would rate it about 6.5/10

[Epimetheus]

Pro text maker spoken :D.

Well It's a good try, bad text indeed but I would rate it about 6.5/10

i know my text is bad xD

[FinalGod]

Render seems copy pasted

[MasterDisaster]

the render seems to blend on its own 'cause of the good flow on the tag.

If you had erased the edges of it or smudged it a bit it would be much better.

Nice try, but you know you need more effort :D

[Amphetamine]

6.5/10

too high.

the render seems to blend on its own 'cause of the good flow on the tag.

If you had erased the edges of it or smudged it a bit it would be much better.

Nice try, but you know you need more effort :D

i suck hard at smudge ;(

[MasterDisaster]

too high.i suck hard at smudge ;(

Νοbody was talented on smudging since the first day.

[Amphetamine]

Νοbody was talented on smudging since the first day.

indeed, at least i have too say that i open ps after 5-6 months and made this shit xd

[MasterDisaster]

indeed, at least i have too say that i open ps after 5-6 months and made this shit xd

read tuts and try things on your own.

Try to develop ur own style, by taking the best parts of tutorials you read.

If you do it wisely, you'll get much better ;0

[Amphetamine]

read tuts and try things on your own.

Try to develop ur own style, by taking the best parts of tutorials you read.

If you do it wisely, you'll get much better ;0

no i wont ready any tut, i am gonna develop my own style.

;D

[FinalGod]

the render seems to blend on its own 'cause of the good flow on the tag.

If you had erased the edges of it or smudged it a bit it would be much better.

Nice try, but you know you need more effort :D

Good flow?Am I the only one that I see a messy flow?

 

 

[Amphetamine]

Good flow?Am I the only one that I see a messy flow?

 

 

i agree the flow is kinda wierdoo

[Vision]

Render: Bad Placement

Effects: Not something special..

Backround: Your backround have a lot of lacks from where you get these resources?