The guide comprehends everything that should be said...but seriously..it looks really bad
maybe make some sort of lists.For example at Increasing Caravan Relation Level when you say the tomes transfor in...add the fhp,fsp and dc one under another with bullets.
The same thing(bulleting) could be done at each subtitle and the image at the end of it.
This are just some tips,not sure if it would look better...but in my mind it does:))