text saks...render glow saks...try to improve the smudge style with some c4d and other things...not always only smudge...read some tutorials about deeph...lighting...etc...

i used some c4d on guitar :S

 

i like the smudge of the guitar, the rest saks

Remove outer glow on render and fix the text.

i didnt put glow on render when i downloaded it was there

awesome ;) Cob!!

is it available for download?