NotAbastard Posted July 9, 2010 Posted July 9, 2010 If this is really your first it's amazing mate. The colours are fine and the effects are also acceptable . Just take care on : -The text - remove that stroke and change the colour and the opacity / you can even apply some C.mask on it to blend it with the rest. -The render is fine now, but you could also smudge it a bit , duplicate it and smudge the secondary ones etc. to make it flow better with the BG -The borders need to be a bit thinner, also change their opacity - low opacity borders tend to look way cooler, especially the thin ones.
xMaylox Posted July 9, 2010 Author Posted July 9, 2010 If this is really your first it's amazing mate. The colours are fine and the effects are also acceptable . Just take care on : -The text - remove that stroke and change the colour and the opacity / you can even apply some C.mask on it to blend it with the rest. -The render is fine now, but you could also smudge it a bit , duplicate it and smudge the secondary ones etc. to make it flow better with the BG -The borders need to be a bit thinner, also change their opacity - low opacity borders tend to look way cooler, especially the thin ones. Can u help me with the text, if u have msn please send me on pm .. cuz i saw it u are expirienced and I wanna talk with u.
ZeRo* Posted July 9, 2010 Posted July 9, 2010 For first try is pretty awesome. You made a good work on background but i can be better ;) the placing of the render is ok and the lighting is good ! Make thinner borders (1px) and it would be more beautiful ;) About the text...The placing is ok but it need some improvements. Read more tutorials and you will make must better signatures.
MiraDBZ Posted July 9, 2010 Posted July 9, 2010 It's very good for a first try. The text needs more work, but overall it looks good.
ZeRo* Posted July 9, 2010 Posted July 9, 2010 The borders need more work :P when you finish your signature go to edit>stroke, choose the color and set the pixels to 1 .
xMaylox Posted July 9, 2010 Author Posted July 9, 2010 The borders need more work :P when you finish your signature go to edit>stroke, choose the color and set the pixels to 1 . I will try something
ZeRo* Posted July 9, 2010 Posted July 9, 2010 Any suggestions? If you fix the borders and the text you gonna see a BIG difference!
xMaylox Posted July 9, 2010 Author Posted July 9, 2010 If you fix the borders and the text you gonna see a BIG difference! Thats is realy hard, if u can help me :)
xMaylox Posted July 9, 2010 Author Posted July 9, 2010 Updated. What about that text? All comments are accepted.
nextlive Posted July 10, 2010 Posted July 10, 2010 Yes it's very good! Tomb raider games are one of my favourite. I have two open tomb raiders now legend and anniversary :P i completed all tomb raider games 2-3 times. I play it since playstation 1 lol.
xMaylox Posted July 10, 2010 Author Posted July 10, 2010 Yes it's very good! Tomb raider games are one of my favourite. I have two open tomb raiders now legend and anniversary :P i completed all tomb raider games 2-3 times. I play it since playstation 1 lol. Like me.
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