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[Dragon©]

[Goddess]

First you're missing light source. Also you gotta work on filling the background more, it looks way empty. You gotta blend it well cause atm it doesn't really looks blended with the background. The text itself looks awful. Try adding simple fonts such as Courier New,Arial or some other. Do not add Strokes or anything. Just simple texts. Work more on color balances and etc. I see you're trying to orientate at smudge techniques. Smudging is one of the hardest techniques to master. Read tutorials to get better. Good luck and keep it up.

[Dragon©]

Thank you for Reply :) :D

[Goddess]

Thank you for Reply :) :D

No problem. If you have any direct question feel free to ask me.