R/CnC Anime Signature

[Strain]

Hello, had some free time and I made this signature..

[Vision]

I can see some mistakes overthere but dont you worry.

Specifically, 

 

1. On the left, your corner its very bright try to dodge a bit not too much just a bit.

2. As about your texts ok strain is fine but your subtext it stands out. Try to use your color backround as a clipping mask to the subtext. 

 

TIP: If you want to have that result go to New Layer > Apply Image from the bar at the top of the PS > and at the applied image that you created press right click and you will see "Create Clipping Mask" after that choose the applied image and press GTRL+Shift to play with the color.

 

3. You could make the focal bigger.

 

That's all dude.

Even like this its good one. I just pointed you some mistakes on it.

Cheers.

Edited January 20, 2014 by PrisM

[Strain]

Thanks for your comment and tip dude :)
By the way, I know how to Create Clipping Mask..
What you mean make the focal bigger? :D

[Vision]

Thanks for your comment and tip dude :)

By the way, I know how to Create Clipping Mask..

What you mean make the focal bigger? :D

 

I mean to resize it a bit and make it bigger.

Not too much just a tone.

[Voqus]

I'll have to disagree with PrisM on some parts.

I believe the dark and the bright side on each side of the signature is purposely done this way to show the clash between light-dark characters.

To me it has a nice feel to it but the signature size is just too small to have the "Strain" text in it, i dont think i have any problem with the subtext.

 

Imo, try practising with sizes like 400x200,500x250 and such so you can even add more detail to it and have more fun.

But its all up to your taste. KIU ^^

 

P.S Focal point is the point that draws the eye attention the most.

[Vision]

I believe the dark and the bright side on each side of the signature is purposely done this way to show the clash between light-dark characters.

 

Actually I was thinking about that and you're right in some point.

I just mention little doding. A tone of it.

[Strain]

Voqus, thank you so much.. So focal is from "focus", I understand what you mean now..
You both told me about size, I made it this size becuase im not VIP Member so the sizes I can use are 500x150, this signature is 350x150.
So, since this signature was about to be used in Maxcheaters there is no point to making it bigger.. 
That's all :)