CnC My First Custom Loading Screen...

[xDarkCorex]

As my subject says this is my first custom Line][age Loading Screen. So any comment and cryticism will be appreciated, Also if you can give suggestions/ideas will be appreciated too.

 

Thank you

 

[`iAndre]

Congrats for trying, but you need a lot of practice.
First of all font is wrong and all texts are bad placed with wrong effects.
Bg isn't good, you just paste it there. (try to work on it)
And you jsut dropped a render in the mid of nowhere which is wrong resized too.

If i was gonna rate it i would give you 2/10.

I'd suggest you to work with the effects of the texts , change fonts and make the text smaller. Also see some guides about resizing.
Also change bg and play with the effects. You can combine images together in order to create a nice bg.
See more guides and keep practising.

[xDarkCorex]

Congrats for trying, but you need a lot of practice.

First of all font is wrong and all texts are bad placed with wrong effects.

Bg isn't good, you just paste it there. (try to work on it)

And you jsut dropped a render in the mid of nowhere which is wrong resized too.

 

If i was gonna rate it i would give you 2/10.

 

I'd suggest you to work with the effects of the texts , change fonts and make the text smaller. Also see some guides about resizing.

Also change bg and play with the effects. You can combine images together in order to create a nice bg.

See more guides and keep practising.

 

 

Thank you for your words bro, ofc.. That was  a first try, so it wasn't better as i saw too at least the render... Also about texts etc.. I move them to the left side so they'll not cover the moon and i though would be better.

 

Thanks again.

[`iAndre]

Thank you for your words bro, ofc.. That was  a first try, so it wasn't better as i saw too at least the render... Also about texts etc.. I move them to the left side so they'll not cover the moon and i though would be better.

 

Thanks again.

Nop, if you need any help/advice drop me a pm.

Also what dimensions did you used ? (I wanna try it know :P )

[Ovenuç®]

As my subject says this is my first custom Line][age Loading Screen. So any comment and cryticism will be appreciated, Also if you can give suggestions/ideas will be appreciated too.

 

Thank you

 

 

 

nice but make it black :D

[xDarkCorex]

Nop, if you need any help/advice drop me a pm.

Also what dimensions did you used ? (I wanna try it know :P )

 

1280 x 1024 I try these pixels height & Width.. :)

[xDarkCorex]

nice but make it black :D

 

To the next one i'll collect all your suggestions and i'll try to make it better :D

 

thank you for your fb bro :D

[`iAndre]

1280 x 1024 I try these pixels height & Width.. :)

thx :)

[Vision]

Start reading how to resize a render this is totally wrong resize.

Also, "LINEAGE" text its too big try to decrease a bit the font size.

Last, work on how can you build a skillful backround.

[xDarkCorex]

Start reading how to resize a render this is totally wrong resize.

Also, "LINEAGE" text its too big try to decrease a bit the font size.

Last, work on how can you build a skillful backround.

 

 

Thank you for your words bro. I'll collect all suggest/ideas and i'll try to make new one very soon :)