RNC Malzahar

[^Wyatt]

Well not much to say, just wanna comments and rates to keep learning and try to improve.

If possible, some advice 'bout text !_!

 

 

 

 

[xDrac]

Well, considering you want some 'advice' on the text specifically.. (the sig itself looks great, however maybe you could have tried to place some more lightning on his chest, where the lightning spiral hits or rather surrounds him, just an idea!)

 

Imo, the text stands out too much.

Probably because of the drop shadow (?). Theres a few dark spots under the text that cause this.

I personally feel like the Wyatt is a little too big too, and maybe a font that is a little more curly would have fit better here. Then again, this is just me theorizing.

 

 

You could have maybe tried to make the light thing in his hand on the left have the same color as the sig itself too. (violet, purple rather than blueish)

But thats just an idea as well.

 

Overall, quite solid imo :P

 

PS: The "Feel it" seems a little too big and the words seem to have too much space in between.

[^Wyatt]

Well, considering you want some 'advice' on the text specifically.. (the sig itself looks great, however maybe you could have tried to place some more lightning on his chest, where the lightning spiral hits or rather surrounds him, just an idea!)

 

Imo, the text stands out too much.

Probably because of the drop shadow (?). Theres a few dark spots under the text that cause this.

I personally feel like the Wyatt is a little too big too, and maybe a font that is a little more curly would have fit better here. Then again, this is just me theorizing.

 

 

You could have maybe tried to make the light thing in his hand on the left have the same color as the sig itself too. (violet, purple rather than blueish)

But thats just an idea as well.

 

Overall, quite solid imo :P

 

PS: The "Feel it" seems a little too big and the words seem to have too much space in between.

:p ty

Tomorrow i'll try to fix some points.

About the fonts its something hard for me, too much fonts, need to find a way to look for the good ones... or maybe is just about getting used to it, with time.

[^Wyatt]

Here comes the modification.

Tried to:

-Put a font that fits better

-Remove the excessive shadow

-Put the "feel it" more close

-Change the color of the light ball, to more purple

-Add more light where the spirals hit the chest

 

[Tijseh]

Here comes the modification.

Tried to:

-Put a font that fits better

-Remove the excessive shadow

-Put the "feel it" more close

-Change the color of the light ball, to more purple

-Add more light where the spirals hit the chest

 

 

Looks good still the text aint really it and light dark contrast is yeah dunno ain't really like it should

[xDrac]

Here comes the modification.

Tried to:

-Put a font that fits better

-Remove the excessive shadow

-Put the "feel it" more close

-Change the color of the light ball, to more purple

-Add more light where the spirals hit the chest

 

 

Yes, that's better already!

 

Took my time to maybe point out what I mean a little more with this image

 

Could look a little like this perhaps, but whether thats better or not thats for you to decide :P

 

Light might be a little too much and stuff, but you get the point (?) xD

And as for the render and blending that right arm in a little more, could try and erase stuff around the arm with a soft brush a little bit so that it looks like some of it fades into the back(ground). That has the effect of it looking like the light (or w/e) is shining onto the arm/hand.

[^Wyatt]

Here it goes the last try !_!