xax0r Posted February 7, 2013 Posted February 7, 2013 My first try after few months, I see that I lost a lot of practice, but I'm waiting for comments... Quote
xax0r Posted February 8, 2013 Author Posted February 8, 2013 What you think about this one tag? :) Quote
xDrac Posted February 8, 2013 Posted February 8, 2013 I liked the first one more (even if the second one has kirito in it *.*) first one looks alright but on the second the effects look rather cheap and don't fit in well to the character render. the subtext... the lower part of the gradient is too dark. Quote
xax0r Posted February 8, 2013 Author Posted February 8, 2013 I liked the first one more (even if the second one has kirito in it *.*) first one looks alright but on the second the effects look rather cheap and don't fit in well to the character render. the subtext... the lower part of the gradient is too dark. Yeah, you have right when I look after some hours on second tag I see that the effects are cheap and don't fit. Thanks a lot for your comment. Quote
Vision Posted February 9, 2013 Posted February 9, 2013 As for your first one, I like it nice effect on his body and sword. For the second one, I would like if you design something else and not the same. First one is better. Quote
MrHotFire Posted February 9, 2013 Posted February 9, 2013 I really like the first one.The second one is good too but you need practise.;) Quote
xax0r Posted February 9, 2013 Author Posted February 9, 2013 As for your first one, I like it nice effect on his body and sword. For the second one, I would like if you design something else and not the same. First one is better. Thanks mate for comment. I will try to do something with Kirito again. I need an idea for that :D I really like the first one.The second one is good too but you need practise.;) I know that I need more practise, we're learing all fucking life ;) Quote
xDrac Posted February 10, 2013 Posted February 10, 2013 This is much better, now we are talking. I won't comment the text. It looks okay but pretty standard and nothing outstanding. Not sure how I should about the "aura" you put around Kirito. But it doesn't look too bad. Anyways, this one is certainly better than the second, imo. Quote
xax0r Posted February 10, 2013 Author Posted February 10, 2013 This is much better, now we are talking. I won't comment the text. It looks okay but pretty standard and nothing outstanding. Not sure how I should about the "aura" you put around Kirito. But it doesn't look too bad. Anyways, this one is certainly better than the second, imo. Thanks you a lot. About text I know that this one's just simple, nothing special. About "aura" I was imagine how it should look and that's it. Quote
Vision Posted February 10, 2013 Posted February 10, 2013 Indeed, a lot improved.. Continue at this style. Quote
edneser Posted February 10, 2013 Posted February 10, 2013 the third one its a lot better then the second one, good job Quote
Ideo Posted February 11, 2013 Posted February 11, 2013 The first one and the third look awesome :not bad: Quote
xax0r Posted February 11, 2013 Author Posted February 11, 2013 Thanks you guys! :) I will try to do something new :) Quote
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