The first try is way better indeed.I'd suggest you to read guides about:
1)Blending
2)Depth
3)Flow
4)Smudging
5)Placing - Composition
6)The rules of thirds.
Then you can get to learn many techniques on making tags :)
GFX = Graphics(grafix)
The project can make it trully famous.
Next should be photoshop's sections expanding.
There are many guys here that can make it better and this will help on making maxcheaters one of the best forums worldwide.
Since we got here,there's nothing we can't achieve.Just believe in us(you)!