[Comment and rate]2 Signatures

[xTheVioLaToR]

this one is followed by a tut from dope (gfxresource),i didnt got somuch into this tut,but the final result is good i think...

 

 

And this one,is one sig which is just for test reasons,to try to make a HQ background without a stock...(awful text :P),feel free to comment them both

 

ITS NOT FROM BLANES TUT

 

 

PS:I think i have improved much on the light source,and a bit into the text....what do you think?

[IntrigueX]

Both kinda suck.

[xTheVioLaToR]

explain me why,and what to fix thats not a rate only a bad comment -.-

[IntrigueX]

They're messy and there is no smoothness.

[Blαck Dεvil]

Sucks text :X:X:X

[Mask]

They're messy and there is no smoothness.

Sucks text :X:X:X

[Kяaσh]

explain me why,and what to fix thats not a rate only a bad comment -.-

You need a lot of work on the texts.

[`Vaxil]

You need a lot of work on the texts.

+1 and they are too rough imo.

[xTheVioLaToR]

please avoid commenting on the text and say me about the rest...thank you