[Rate&Comment]Tidus

Try adding some borders.

The text is a REALLY bad try, because of its colour, font, size.. generally everything..

The colours don't really match. You should realise from the beginning that the render's colours are badly matched, so you should either change a render, or balance these colours.

As for that kind of lightsource, in the bottom, that looks like fog, it's another bad idea as well. You should place it near the render to give emphasis on the focal and provide it with light.

The render is badly placed. Try resizing it, focusing on its face.

Those stars are a REALLY bad idea as well.. They don't fit there and it's obvious.. Removing them would create a kind of empty space, but it would make the outcome kinda better.

Last but not least, The effects from SoFi's guides haven't been used well. Since you see that something goes wrong, you have to delete some layers and re-start, or try to fix what's wrong by deleting some parts, or so.

I just explained you with more details, what everybody above is trying to tell.