R/CnC Intro

[Ænvision Graphics]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SfcA9JWvo9I

I would like some constructive criticism on this intro I created for some fellow.
What should I improve and what didn't you like in it?

Edited October 5, 2014 by Ænvision Graphics

[Lelouch]

Well, right now, the only thing that I would say is .. nothing, really. Pretty good. Just one thing (just a thought, don't know how it would look like): when the beat comes on and the text "reveals", why didn't you try making the text appear with the beat (in three text parts with the beat or four or something like that).

[xDamian]

It's pretty good but I think you could somehow improve the outro, just fading out doesn't come out that good.

Maybe let the text remain while the lines slowly go back away, it could turn out good, idk. I'll post again if I think of something else.

By the way, If you're only looking for criticism you should change the topic prefix from R/CnC to CnC.

[Strain]

I would agree with Lelouch, would be better if you could change the way that text appears, so it goes with the beat.

[Ænvision Graphics]

Alright, I'll take note of your advice. Thanks!