I think that it needs just few changements.
If you are followed by sofis tut,
Then you should work a little more on the text,
and on the left side.
Everything else is perfect (If you followed SoFi's tut)
I know that it doesn't have anything special,
It isn't very good and everything.
I'm trying to make everything myself (I don't read tutorials etc. and everything).
'cuz when I create something following them (Especially design's),
It looks badder than this.
I think that because she udnerstood that if she learns how to create perfect web designs (.PSD etc or Coded),
She can learn money.
Or just because she wants to learn how to create perfect web design's ;D
btw this is just my guess.
HELL NO !