First one is poor .. i can do the same and i'm a beginner in photoshop.
Second .. i don't know what's wrong .. it's like render doesn't fit with lighting effect ..
hm .. i want .. i don't know what i want ^^
i think i want a signature ..
y yes .. i want a signature ..
render: eminem or Mesut Ozil
text: twinkie and no subtext
price: 4k adena ( Raule will give me, so don't say i don't have 4k :D )