Comment :D Monkey D. Luffy

[Pinaepple]

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[Chrome]

Poor luffy (

 

well as C&C i can say that i still see harsh corner on the left bottom side tho it's smudged + text is totally awful, both font itself and it's color/style.. the smudged background also equals to nothing at all, only disturbs existing motion effect and that abstract on version2 is totally not on it's place... well overall it looks awful :/ no offense dude, only a C&C

[Pinaepple]

Poor luffy (

 

well as C&C i can say that i still see harsh corner on the left bottom side tho it's smudged + text is totally awful, both font itself and it's color/style.. the smudged background also equals to nothing at all, only disturbs existing motion effect and that abstract on version2 is totally not on it's place... well overall it looks awful :/ no offense dude, only a C&C

:D

first of all thanks for you comment.

second i try to wont make the same wrong other time :D

thanks again

[SuFFLeR]

Nice one mate.

9/10