well,if its for me i will be kind (a bit)

 

if you remove this shitty c4d in front of the render it can be good one

text can be seen (i dont say is good,just that it doesnt hurt my eye)

the lighting can be seen (tthe same)

the bg,is in the middle of the category:<<sucks>> and <<try harder>>

ok you are improved!

Cleaned. Please Stay IN Topic .

 

TY in advance.

make the render a duplicate

and then put it 1st

make the render a duplicate

and then put it 1st

I tried but it kinda sucked...............